Impossible and Dirty
On the precipice of currency
infuriatingly
drugged and delirious
impossible and dirty
courteous out of insincerity
On the precipice of currency
infuriatingly
drugged and delirious
impossible and dirty
courteous out of insincerity
Nice cliches
I really like the photograph and the poem. Not really understanding the previous comment too well, though. I guess that drugged and delirious is a phrase (maybe even a cliche) that is used often.
Doesn’t matter anyway, probably. I can only speak for myself. I write and keep after it. I want to see what’s around the next corner. I’ve used all sorts of phrases (cliches and whatnot) I’ve heard,in my haiku writing. It has bothered me off and on, but I keep to my main goal which is: Continue to write!
You commented on a poem of mine several weeks ago, and I just realized I could click your name to get here. You should join Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally– it’s a great group of writers and I have been getting many readers and comments and improving my craft. Nice to read you– I will be back.
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
Your image and words prompt thoughts of insane greed. thanks
some good line here…how true this one is “courteous out of insincerity”
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/jingles-july-follower-awards-happy-4th.html
Please pick 2 to 5 awards from the post.
Enjoy the fun!
Smiles!
you’re more of a spammer than you are a poet
oh i dig that! i wanna gain the ability to say much with just few adjectives.